critique this shiznit

[pauldun170]

One way to go about it is to first summarize the guys main points (without all knob polishin " he makes an excellent point" bs. Then critique point by point. Do not critique anecdotes and other fluff in the article. As a reader, I want to start off the knowing what the he'll you are critiquing. This is not an opportunity for you to list off unsupported opinions. You should focus on critique of his opinions. Each critique you make should be logical and be able to stand up to review. Remove conversational tone.